Rewrite this into a 250-word paragraph.

I learned how to develop a compelling lead when writing informational essays. It's something I struggle with the most. By writing better paragraphs and avoiding long, rambling sentences, I improved my writing. In my future writing, I plan to use more elaboration and have a more teaching tone. Non-fiction is critical since it provides a glimpse of reality.

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Answer 1

When writing my explanative essay, I found a way to increase  compelling leads. That's what I'm having the most trouble with. By writing paragraphs greater and deriving long, verbose sentences, I improved my writing. In the   Fate Letter, I will apply additional details and use additional coaching tones.  Non-fiction is important because they give insight into reality.


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Find the following verses in the Book of Psalms. Study the verses and write the synthetic parallel that the verses use.

Psalm 1:1–2

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Answer: here is the verse now you do the rest of the work

Explanation: Blessed is the man who does not walk in the counsel of the wicked or stand in the way of sinners or sit in the seat of mockers. But his delight is in the law of the LORD, and on his law he meditates day and night.

Answer:

1 Blessed is the man

who walks not in the counsel of the wicked,

nor stands in the way of sinners,

nor sits in the seat of scoffers;

2  but his delight is in the law of the Lord,

and on his law he meditates day and night.

Write the meaning of what these verses mean to you

Explanation:

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This is the sample qusteion for you

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Answer:

MAY I KNOW WHAT IS  THE SAMPLE QUESTION ?

Explanation:

The following passage is an example of which of the literary devices listed below?

"Huge pines were twisted and snapped off, blown sideways...He pulled up enough thick limbs for a bed, green and spicy with the new broken sap smell..."


personification

simile

imagery

metaphor

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Answer:

I believe it's C, imagery

Explanation:

The quotation is a description of the scene taking place, which therefore makes it an example of imagery.

I apologize if this is incorrect.

Imagery is an example of which of the literary devices listed below. Hence, option C is correct.

What are literary devices?

Using the literary device of personification, non-human objects are given human traits. It is one of the most popular literary devices and has many uses. improves the visual.

A literary device is a writing technique used by authors to make meaning clear, express ideas, and highlight important themes in a piece of writing. As an example, a metaphor is a popular example of a literary device.

A literary device is any distinguishing feature of literature or a particular work that we can name, pinpoint, interpret, and/or evaluate. Both literary elements and literary procedures are the correct terms for literary devices.

Thus, option C is correct.

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Which Roman emperor was responsible for a major shift in the dominant religious attitude of the Roman Empire?


1. Constantine


2. Diocletian


3. Hadrian


4. Marcus Aurelius

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The answer is: A - Constantine.

Submit your two-page fictional narrative, written in third person point-of-view. Your story should be centered around a strong character with a clear setting, conflict, climax, and resolution.

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Answer:

If it were me I would just start typing

Explanation:

whenever i get assigned an essay i always spend like a whole day trying to find the perfect opening line. My advice would be just start typing, start in the middle of the story if you have an idea for it. By the time your done writing the middle of your story, you will probably have more ideas for the beginning. Another thing is, is to keep in mind that your story needs to be centered around a strong character and it needs to be in third person. I hope your essay turns out really good, and i hope my advice helped a little.

HIII how is your mental health (this is for a project be honest please)

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Answer:

good

Explanation:

Answer:

great

Explanation:

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Which reference work would be most helpful in finding other forms of the noun torrent?

an encyclopedia

a thesaurus

a dictionary

a glossary

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Explanation:

dictionary............

unscramb feeddn subject is reading

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Answer:

Defend

Explanation:

Defend

Defend! have a good day!!

Write a speech on the topic of an unjust situation you are passionate about. This may be an issue on the community level, or a current national issue.

Remember to use the following elements:

a claim
supporting facts, statistics, and reasons
possible objections to your claim (counterclaims)
a summary and call to action
three transitional words or phrases and one instance of effective keyword repetition
proper documentation of sources using MLA citation style
Your speech should be a minimum of 200 words.

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Answer:

Explanation:

The Great Compromise solved issues between states with small populations and states with large populations.

The Great Compromise was developed at the Constitutional Convention and helped in creating the modern day structure of Congress. In this deal, both states with small populations and large populations got something they wanted. For example, the Senate would be composed of 2 Senators from each state, regardless of their states population. This helped to ensure that smaller states had a voice in the creation of federal laws.

On the other hand, the House of Representatives would have the number of representatives based on a states population. The greater the population, the more representatives. This made larger states happy, as they felt this accurately represented the power they should have in Congress

Spanish

El Gran Compromiso resolvió problemas entre estados con poblaciones pequeñas y estados con poblaciones grandes.

El Gran Compromiso se desarrolló en la Convención Constitucional y ayudó a crear la estructura moderna del Congreso. En este acuerdo, ambos estados con poblaciones pequeñas y grandes obtuvieron algo que querían. Por ejemplo, el Senado estaría compuesto por 2 senadores de cada estado, independientemente de la población de su estado. Esto ayudó a asegurar que los estados más pequeños tuvieran voz en la creación de leyes federales.

Por otro lado, la Cámara de Representantes tendría el número de representantes basado en la población de un estado. Cuanto mayor sea la población, más representantes. Esto hizo felices a los estados más grandes, ya que sentían que esto representaba con precisión el poder que deberían tener en el Congreso.

Answer:

This speech would be really easy if you did it yourself.

If you pick a topic you are really passionate about you should be able to write the speech in under an hour

Answer the question below from I ready I give brainliest

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Second sentence, First sentence then the Third Sentence
Second sentence,first sentence,third sentence hope IT can help

who need brainiest? let me know I got you

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Answer:

you are giving free brainlist? That’s really nice of you! Have a great day! ✌️

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which sentence is an example of stage directions?

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Answer:

B seems to make the most sense, but I thought stage directions were like center, left, right, up, and down. I could be wrong about that, though.

Explanation:

Yes B is correct, stage direction is the explanation of a character’s action outside the confines of the story.

The Ornithopter

Many people know Leonardo da Vinci today as an artist, and it is true that he was indeed a great painter and sculptor, but he was also an inventor and one of the first individuals in recorded history to draft detailed plans for a flying machine.

In order to make a living, Leonardo often depended upon wealthy individuals who would commission work from him. That means they would hire him and pay him to create specific work they wanted. In 1482, when he was 30 years old, Leonardo heard of an opportunity to work for Ludovico Sforza, the Duke of Milan. The duke, however, did not want a painter; he wanted a military engineer to help him defend the city against its enemies. This was an excellent opportunity that would pay Leonardo well, but Leonardo was a peaceful man. He considered war to be “a beastly madness.” He preferred to make things of beauty.

Leonardo made the decision that he could tolerate making weapons if the resources the duke could provide would also allow him to create things he loved. He sent a letter to the duke detailing his skills in designing and building weapons. “I will assemble catapults, mangonels, trebuchets and other instruments of wonderful efficiency…I will make an infinite number of items for attack and defense,” he wrote.

Leonardo’s letter convinced the duke of his talents, and he got the job. He set about designing the weapons that the duke desired. But Leonardo was infinitely creative, always thinking of new things, new ideas—he could not be limited to weapons alone. One idea that he had not mentioned in his application was the ornithopter. It was not a weapon of war, and it was not something that the duke had asked for, but Leonardo went ahead and designed it anyway.

Leonardo was fascinated by the idea of flight. The word “ornithopter” comes from two words meaning “bird” and “wings.” And on first inspection, his plans resembled a bird’s wings attached to a human being’s arms. He concluded that a human being’s arms were neither strong enough nor light enough to stay in the air for long. So, his design included sets of foot pedals and levers that were operated with the hands. He created detailed plans and presented them to the duke, uncertain of how the duke would react to a design for which he didn’t ask.

As it turned out, the duke was very impressed with the ornithopter, but it wasn’t Leonardo’s innovation that excited him. He immediately thought of the ways this machine could be used in war. If a spy could fly over the enemy’s camp, imagine what information he could gather! This was not what Leonardo had intended for his beautiful flying machine.

But how Leonardo felt about war turned out not to matter in the end. His ornithopter was never built—along with his designs for tanks, parachutes, diving suits, machine guns, and even robots that he created for the duke. The ideas of Leonardo da Vinci were centuries ahead of the technology needed to make them.



He created detailed plans and presented them to the duke, uncertain of how the duke would react to a design for which he didn't ask.

Which type of conflict is expressed in this excerpt?


A. individual vs. nature

B. individual vs. individual

C. individual vs. society

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The answer is c . Individual vs society

What do Brian’s
responses to
these devastating
setbacks show
about him?

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is there a picture or story you could show?
Do you happen to have the Context?

Please help me with this question

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Answer:

Bellwether

Explanation:

Bellwether means "a leading sheep in a flock". Seems pretty similar to me.

Answer: bellwether is the correct answer for your question

Pls help i put 100 points into this bc I rich XD

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Answer:

I'm not sure what this answer is but, I can help with other problems. The picture is blurry so I can't tell what is what.

Explanation:

Answer:

Explanation:

chronological order:

a paragraph about the result of studying for an exam.

cause and effect:

a paragraph about what happens when you stay up too late on school nights.

a paragraph about the consequences of not brushing your teeth.

similarity and difference:

a paragraph about your favorite movie and your least favorite movie.

a paragraph about the nutrition of fast food and the nutrition of fast food.

question and answer:

a paragraph about the necessity of school uniforms.

The _____ of The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn occurs when Huck learns that Jim has been freed in his master’s will.

conflict
climax
anticlimax
denouement

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Answer:

Climax

Explanation:

Answer:

denouement

Explanation:

which option is a complex sentence

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option b is correct answer

Answer b is correct because it includes 2 thoughts, Separated by a comma!

what subject does willow not know much about in counting by 7s

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Answer:

Counting by 7s' main character is Willow Chance, a little girl who has lost two sets of parents in her short life - she never knew her blood parents and her adoptive ones die in a terrible accident.

Willow never knew her blood parents in a car incident

How did Diocletian change the Roman Empire?


1. He made Christianity legal.


2. He divided the empire into two halves.


3. He moved the capital to Constantinople.


4. He made Christianity the official religion.

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Answer:

Option 2

He divided the empire into two halves.

Explanation:

Diocletian also restructured the Roman government by establishing the Tetrarchy, a system of rule in which four men shared rule over the massive Roman Empire. The empire was effectively divided in two, with an Augustus and a subordinate Caesar in each half.

Answer:

2

Explanation:

Diocletian secured the empire's borders and purged it of all threats to his power. He separated and enlarged the empire's civil and military services, and reorganized the empire's provincial divisions, establishing the largest and most bureaucratic government in the history of the empire.

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How do we know that some pattern, rhythm, or meter was present in some of the Psalms?

Many psalms were sung.
The first line of the Psalm states the pattern.
Many musical words and notes are used in the psalms.
Rhythm is detected when a psalm is read aloud.

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Answer: 2 Many musical words and notes are used in the psalms

Explanation:

Because I’d you re-read it over you will see it’s psalms and more reread

Which phrase best defines a sitcom?

a series of interconnected episodes following a set group of characters

a series of self-contained episodes following a set group of characters

a stand-alone episode designed to gauge interest in a show

a series of self-contained episodes following a rotating group of characters

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Answer:

set group of characters

a series of self-contained episodes following a set group of characters

Explanation:

on usually weekly ,and in sucession

Answer: C

A stand alone episode designed to gauge interest in a show

How do we know that some pattern, rhythm, or meter was present in some of the Psalms?

Many psalms were sung.
The first line of the Psalm states the pattern.
Many musical words and notes are used in the psalms.
Rhythm is detected when a psalm is read aloud.

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Answer: Many musical words and notes were used in the Psalms

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ABC Order and Definitions

1.React

2.Shift

3.Specify

4.Thesis

5.audience

6.format

7.purpose

8.introduction

9.focus

10.conclusion
11.influence

12.fleeting

13.mentorship

14.normal

15.participate

16.positive

17.circumstantial

18.emotional
19.contagion

20.fleeting



ABC Order and Definitions




Write down 45 affixes containing the sufffix:
-or
-ment
-ness

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Answer:

Alphabetic order:

1: audience: the assembled spectators or listeners at a public event, such as a play, movie, concert, or meeting.

2: circumstantial: pointing indirectly toward someone's guilt but not conclusively proving it.

3:conclusion: the end or finish of an event or process.

4: contagion: the communication of disease from one person to another by close contact.

5: emotional: relating to a person's emotions.

6: fleeting: lasting for a very short time.

7: focus: the center of interest or activity, the state or quality of having or producing clear visual definition.

8: format: the way in which something is arranged or set out.

9: influence: the capacity to have an effect on the character, development, or behavior of someone or something, or the effect itself.

10: introduction: a formal presentation of one person to another, in which each is told the other's name.

11: mentorship: the guidance provided by a mentor, especially an experienced person in a company or educational institution.

12: normal: conforming to a standard; usual, typical, or expected. The usual, average, or typical state or condition.

13: participate: take part in an action or endeavour.

14: positive: consisting in or characterized by the presence or possession of features or qualities rather than their absence. Constructive, optimistic, or confident. A good, affirmative, or constructive quality or attribute.

15: purpose: the reason for which something is done or created or for which something exists. To have as one's intention or objective.

16: react: respond or behave in a particular way in response to something.

17: shift: move or cause to move from one place to another, especially over a small distance.

18: specify: identify clearly and definitely. To state a fact or requirement clearly and precisely.

19: thesis: a statement or theory that is put forward as a premise to be maintained or proved. A long essay or dissertation involving personal research, written by a candidate for a college degree.

45 words ending in or, ness, or ment

1: mayor

2: supervisor.

3: contractor.

4: competitor.

5: prosecutor.

6: ambassador.

7: instructor.

8: integrator.

9: kindness

10: nearsightedness

11: warmheartedness

12: halfheartedness

13: kindheartedness

14: ineffectiveness

15: attentiveness

16: inattentiveness

17: movement

18: acknowledgement

19: micromanagement

20: overdevelopment

21: underemployment

22: extinguishment

23: judgement

24: advertisement

25: encouragement

26: establishment

27: labor

28: tutor

29: accelerator

30: minor

31: actor

32: predecessor.

33: incinerator.

34: commentator.

35: thickness

36: coldheartedness

37: descriptiveness

38: unpleasantness

39: ridiculousness

40: effortlessness

41: outrageousness

42: infectiousness

43: rebelliousness

44: document

45: shipment

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What is the “good news-bad news” situation which happened to allow the family’s wish to come true in the Monkeys Paw?

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Answer:

when they received the 200 pounds

Explanation:

goodnews is that they had received the 200 pounds as wished

bad news is that Herbit, Mr and Mrs. White's son, died in exchange

The good news and bad news situation that happened in the monkey's paw when the family came true is because of the amount of 200 pounds.

What is the news?

The news is information that is received by people who are watching television or listening to radio. It is not compulsory that all the news which a person is listening to is used for that person; some people listen to the news so that they can be aware of what is happening in the whole world

A situation that was happening in the monkey's paw The family's wish came true when they received two types of news; one was good news and the second was bad news.

The good news was that they received 200 pounds as a wish, and at the same time, when the exchange was done by, the family members learned that Herbert, Mr. and Mrs. White's son, had died.

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what's wrong with this sentence ? . . .

" Let's check out their calender. "

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Answer:

Calender

Explanation:

The word calendar is spelt incorrectly.

I made this mistake in my middle school spelling bee. lol

Answer: The apostrophe

Explanation: With the apostrophe it's let is.

Which sentence is the correct punctuation usage of the semicolon, colon, or comma?

A
Professor Brown has left; the laboratory, however, you may still be able to reach her through email.

B
Professor Brown; has left the laboratory however; you may still be able to reach her through email.

C
Professor Brown has left the laboratory, however you may; still be able to reach her through email.

D
Professor Brown has left the laboratory; however, you may still be able to reach her through email.

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D. is the correct answer.
D is correct because

which sentence is the most concise

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Answer: A

Explanation:

The answer is-The person from America is in the city of Tokyo.

Which of the following is not an effective way to find out about a character? FYI, It's not (A).
(A). How they look
(B). How others react to them
(C). How the stars were positioned when they were born
(D). How they act

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Answer:

WELL

ALL

OF

THESE

ARE

IMPORTANT

FACTORS

Answer:

D no doubt

Explanation:

Mr kapoor is an NRI.______is currently based in the USA.

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Answer:

The answer is he

is this answer correct

He is the correct answer. Mr. Kapoor is an NRI. He is currently based in the USA
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