Which revision would most improve the body
paragraph
Read the body paragraph from Antonin's thetorical
analysis essay on Shirley Chisholm's presidential
announcement speech
At the beginning of her speech, Chisholm uses parallel
syntax to emphasize her claim that she is the ideal
candidate She presents herself as a new kind of
candidate who can bring an era of positivity to the US
She says that Nixon failed to bring the courage the
spirit, the character, and the words to lift us, to bring
out the best in us, to rekindle in each of us our faith in
the American dream Chisholm's stylized phrasing
underscores the incredible opportunity that Nixon
missed and that she can set right.
providing clear connections between the thesis and
Chisholm's syntax structure
adding more transitions to describe how the ideas in
the paragraph are related
using a clear tople sentence to connect the thesis of
the essay to its purpose
including several more quotations that highlight the
positivity in the speech

A work of literature is revised in order to make its meaning clearer. One of the techniques of revision is to reduce long sentences to short ones and use correct grammatical errors and use the right tenses.

At the beginning of her speech, Chisholm uses parallel syntax to emphasize her claim that she is the ideal candidate.

She presents herself as a new kind of candidate who can bring an era of positivity to the U.S. She says that Nixon failed to bring the courage the spirit, the character, and the words to lift us, to bring out the best in us, to rekindle in each of us our faith in the American dream.

Chisholm's stylized phrasing underscores the incredible opportunity that Nixon missed and that she can set right.

The phrasing provides clear connections between the thesis and Chisholm's syntax structure, adding more transitions to describe how the ideas in the paragraph are related using a clear topic sentence that connects the thesis of the essay, to its purpose, including several more quotations that highlight the positivity in the speech.

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Which statement most accurately captures the central idea of the poem?
(A) Surfing is both a challenging and dangerous activity.
(B) Surfing is a way to learn more about cycles in the natural world.
(C) Surfers must connect with the motion of the waves to be successful.
(D) Surfers must practice extensively to be able to master the activity.

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4. How does the author's discussion of Jim Crow help
readers understand the consequences of racial
segregation laws?
O A It emphasizes how African Americans had
access to lower quality services and spaces, and
more di culty participating in voting.
OB It stresses that African Americans had to travel
north if they wanted to avoid the discrimination
present in the South
OC It shows how many spaces were reserved for
whites, while people of color were not allowed
their own spaces
OD Ithighlights how dangerous it was for African
Americans to challenge Jim Crowlaws in the
South

how a good personal lifestyle plan may assist then to achieve their post school goals​

Which of the following is an example of an informal definition?



1.Aquaculture is the science and practice of growing fish for food; in other words, aquaculture is fish farming.



2.Aquaculture has become an important part of the world's food supply. Fish that are farmed using aquaculture are often used for commercial purposes. Researchers are working to expand aquaculture to take a role in marine and freshwater restoration projects.



3.Like so many modern innovations, aquaculture solves certain problems while it creates a few new ones. Opponents of aquaculture claim that farmed fish can transfer diseases and parasites to wild fish populations if the two environments mix.



4.The Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations defines aquaculture (noun) as "the farming of aquatic organisms: fish, mollusks, crustaceans, aquatic plants, crocodiles, alligators, turtles, and amphibians."

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Which of the following is the hook?

Question 2 options:

When most people think about pets, they likely think about cats and dogs, perhaps birds or bunnies. In recent years, more exotic animals have been brought into the pet debate, making one consider the possibility of making a monkey or lion cub a pet.


Still, some people may argue that "you are more likely to contract E. coli and die than die from being attacked by an exotic animal," (REXANO 38-41).


Exotic animals are unpredictable, and "only specially trained and qualified individuals with the help of a specifically equipped facility are able to meet the needs of exotic animals," (Lewis 53-55).


This is cruel because not having a suitable habitat for the pet's innate needs can negatively impact its social and mental state. If an animal is unable to live as it would in its natural habitat, it might suffer emotionally or physically as a result.

Is the answer correct or incorrect

Read this passage from "How a Cat Played Robinson Crusoe."

When spring came back to the island, with the nightly shrill chorus of frogs in the shallow pools, and the young grass alive with nesting birds, the prisoner's life became almost pleasant in its easy abundance. But now she was once more homeless, since her snug den had vanished with the snow. This did not much matter, however, for the weather grew warmer and more tranquil day by day. And she herself, in being forced back upon her instincts, had learned to be contented. Nevertheless, with all her capacity for learning and adapting herself, she had not forgotten anything.
One theme of this story is "Necessity is the mother of invention." How does the sentence "And she herself, in being forced back upon her instincts, had learned to be contented" help to develop this theme?

Question 10 options:

The cat is proud of how little she needs to feel comfortable now.



The cat is happy now that the family is gone and she has the house to herself.



The cat was used to hunting for her own food, so her instincts were always there.



The cat was used to being cared for, so she had to learn how to survive on her own.

All of the following sentences are from same paragraph

Ling thinks that 6 x 8 + 32 + 4 = 20. Is she correct? Explain your answer.​

What does Hà do, without her mother's knowledge, on the first day of the new year? the book is inside out and back again​

which of the following is a basic principle of democracy?

A. Participation
B. Equality
C. Fair elections
D. All of the above

Part B: Which evidence from Animal Farm, chapter 5, best supports the correct answer in PART A question 1?

“On every kind of pretext she would run away from work and go to the drinking pool, where she would stand foolishly gazing at her own reflection in the water.” (45)

“‘He didn’t! I wasn’t! It isn’t true!’ cried Mollie, beginning to prance about and paw the ground.” (46)

“She was between the shafts of a smart dog cart painted red and black, which was standing outside a public-house.” (46)

“The two disagreed at every point where disagreement was possible.” (47)

Using a Venn diagram, show your understanding of the two characters in the story "The Two Well-Diggers".​

which of these is one way that a thesaurus differs from a dictionary?

Florida's progressive DUI laws take
into account.
the victim's age
all prior traffic citations
the driver's age
prior DUI convictions

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How do I analyze a poem

What is the rhyme scheme of
the third stanza in Whitman's
poem?
A. aabbccdd
B. aabbcded
C. aabcdddd
D. aabbcccd

Which one makes more sense?
“This is one of the good benefits of bottled water sold at schools is that it’s healthy for students.” Or “One of the good benefits of bottled water sold at schools is that it’s healthy for students.”

Add or remove commas, if necessary, until the sentence has correct punctuation.
The astronaut inspired KyrieŢIrving to sign up for
space camp.

Which activity is a good strategy for responding to counterclaims within your
argumentative research essay?

Chapter 16
What are some things that begin to change after the missionaries come to the village?

Why is America different from other nations ? How does Walter Whitman feel about America at the time this was written ?

2.6 Analyse why meeting your tax obligations may be important to you as a young entrepreneur. (1x4) (4) 2.7 Assess how good work ethics may assist you to remain employed even if the workplace may be forced to lose staff. (1x4) (4)​

Should People Be Allowed to Own Exotic Animals As Pets? When most people think about pets, they likely think about cats and dogs, perhaps birds or bunnies. In recent years, more exotic animals have been brought into the pet debate, making one consider the possibility of making a monkey or lion cub a pet. People should not own exotic animals as pets because it is cruel to the animal and it can be dangerous to people. One reason people should not own exotic animals as pets is that it can be cruel to the animal. Sadly “many exotic pet owners end up being unable to provide proper living environments for fully grown pets” (Lewis 68-70). This is cruel because not having a suitable habitat for the pet’s innate needs can negatively impact its social and mental state. If an animal is unable to live as it would in its natural habitat, it might suffer emotionally or physically as a result. Though the possibility of inflicting harm on an animal should be reason enough, there are dangers associated with exotic pet ownership as well. Another reason people should not own exotic animals is that is can be dangerous. Exotic animals are unpredictable, and “only specially trained and qualified individuals with the help of a specifically equipped facility are able to meet the needs of exotic animals,” (Lewis 53-55). This can be dangerous because if exotic pet owners are not properly trained, they may get injured or killed. Exotic animals can cause serious injury to people whether they intend to or not. If injury occurs, the animal will pay the ultimate price even though they are being forced to live in an unnatural environment. Though many reasons exist not to own exotic animals as pets, there are still people who think it is a perfectly acceptable practice. Still, some people may argue that “you are more likely to contract E. coli and die than die from being attacked by an exotic animal,” (REXANO 38-41). However, even if death from an exotic animal attack is rare, these types of animals can cause serious injury which makes the

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Before they transform into moths,some caterpillars spin cocoons inside curled, dried leaves. What are three adjectives?