Which of the following revised sentences best eliminates wordiness?
a.
correct as written
b.
In the next few days, the bus company should announce the new schedule.
c.
The new schedule from the bus company is expected to be possibly posted in the next few days.
d.
The bus company will expect an announcement of its schedule during the next few days.


Please select the best answer from the choices provided

A
B
C
D

Answer:

The answer I think is correct is B.

Explanation:

I think this one is correct because this makes more sense then the rest, there is a coma ofc, but it also says that the bus company is going to announce their new schedule in the next few days because they shouldn't take too long to announce their bus company. Hopefully this helps you.

Answer: The answer is B

Explanation: Just got it right on Edge :)

PLEASE ANSWER ASAP! NO FILE LINK! Who were the half-bloods and satyr in the story of Thalia?

FROM PERCY JACKSON

Read the excerpt from The Secret Garden.

Suddenly a clear rippling little sound broke out near her and she turned around. She was standing a few feet from a young apple-tree, and the robin had flown on to one of its branches and had burst out into a scrap of a song. Ben Weatherstaff laughed outright.

"What did he do that for?" asked Mary.

"He's made up his mind to make friends with thee," replied Ben. "Dang me if he hasn't took a fancy to thee."

"To me?" said Mary, and she moved toward the little tree softly and looked up.

Which evidence best supports the idea that Mary is beginning to change?

"She was standing a few feet from a young apple-tree."


"…she turned around."


"…she moved toward the little tree softly…"


"'What did he do that for?' asked Mary."

Select the correct answer. Which statement best defines theme?

what can i say when I'm introducting a book

like for example:

who has a dog

or

did you have a dog

(need help)

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After world War II, the soviet union and the United sthtes both proposed Missions
to Mars, but neither sent a manned spacecraft there.
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Which of the following best describes how the author introduces Wilma Rudolph?

A. as a nervous and unprepared athlete
B. as a prepared athlete with an unusual life
C. as a hopeful new athlete beginning her training
D. As an unlikely athlete hoping to be in the Olympics one day​

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they saw it. passive voice​

Anton needs to identify the eight different scoring statistics for all the players on his school’s basketball team. Which graphic organizer would be best for this assignment?
a.
Chart
c.
Box
b.
Venn diagram
d.
Any of these

If you prearrange a meeting, when do you plan it?

How should the sentence below be changed to correct the problem of capitalization?
Audrey Hepburn is one of my favorite actresses; I loved her in My fair lady.
OA.
use a capital a in actresses
B.
use a lowercase a and h in Audrey and Hepburn
OC.
use a capital / and / in lady and fair
D.
use a lowercase m in My

Who holds more responsibility for media bias the journalist or the reader

Which excerpt from Part 1 of The Odyssey is cited properly in MLA style?


A.) “This was an army, trained to fight on horseback /

or, where the ground required, on foot.” Homer (55-56)

B.) “This was an army, trained to fight on horseback /

or, where the ground required, on foot” (Homer 55-56).

C.) “This was an army, trained to fight on horseback /

or, where the ground required, on foot” Homer, 55-56.

D.) “This was an army, trained to fight on horseback /

or, where the ground required, on foot.” (Homer) 55-56

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Which sentence contains an example of antithesis?

You learn by watching, you learn by listening, and you learn by asking.
We are going to practice what we preach.
You have to work harder than you ever have.
We either win it all or lose everything.

What is this part of the passage mostly about? A. Lily worked with her father to make many mugs with the same shape. B. Lily needed to find a big factory that would make her mug from her. C. Lily got the idea from her father to sell a lot of different mugs. D. Lily tried many different ways to make the best mug for the factory mold.

Please answer this correctly without making mistakes

he carton is sealed or the milk is sour.1.The milk is not sour or the carton is not sealed.2.The carton is not sealed and also the milk is not sour.3.If the carton is not sealed, then the milk will be sour.b.Flowers will bloom only if it rains.1.The flowers will bloom but it will not rain.2.The flowers will not bloom and it will not rain.3.The flowers will not bloom or else it will not rain.c.If you build it, they will come.1.If you build it, then they won't come

SOMEONE PLZ HELP ME WITH THIS QUESTION USING VERB TENSES

Martin ________ the extra vegetables from his garden before the first frost of the winter

1. froze
2. has frozen
3. hsd frozen
4. will have frozen

Hey! Can you give me some help? Which type of writing is likely to rely more on facts and numbers?
*a journal entry
* biography
*a letter of advice
*a newspaper article

Which of the following sentences is capitalized correctly?
OA.
Toula hurried from the biology lab to her advanced calculus 2 class.
OB.
Lupo used Adobe InDesign software to create flyers for the Rotary Club.
OC.
Remee's brother has been a member of the wilderness scouts for years.
OD.
Sylvester asked Magdylena to accompany him to the 2010 emmy awards.

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Choose a debatable topic, one that has two or more sides. It should be a topic that's appropriate for educational purposes and that would interest a broad audience. Consider choosing a topic on which people can take action. You may choose from these topics: 1) violence in video games or movies does or does not influence young people. 2) Using animals as test subjects for medications is ethical or unethical. 3) Argue what is the best way to reduce homelessness in the United States. 4) Green energy is or is not a realistic alternative to fossil fuels. 5) Choose a local issue such as funding cuts or increases for public services like libraries, parks, police, or fire service. 6) Choose a local issue such as homelessness, environmental problems ( waste, water shortages, etc. ) or lack of mental health services. Or, if a different topic comes to mind and meets the criteria, you may use it. Once you have chosen a topic, do a quick online search to see if there is enough information available about it. If the topic is so broad that you think you cannot do it justice in a single paper, try narrowing it. One way to narrow a topic is to ask yourself questions to which you would like to learn the answers. For example, suppose the broad topic is this: Alternative medicines - helpful, unhelpful, or harmful? You might write down questions that make you curious, for example: 1) What types of alternatives medicines exist? 2) What ailments are alternative medicines claimed to be effective for? 3) What studies have been done about alternative medicines? 4) What results have doctors and patients reported? Such questions can guide your research. 1) Write your topic. 2) Write two or more questions that you would like answered about your topic. 3) If you wish to narrow your topic, write the narrow version here. 4) Phrase your topic as a research question that your project will answer. ( Will Mark Brainliest to whomever will be able to help write this). Please write as much as possible). Thank you. ​

Why did Lexi want to help other kids through hard times?

1. Lexi's energy was high, though she didn't know how she should use it.

2. Lexi's friends comforted her, but she knew not everyone gets this support.

3. Lexi's recovery lasted nearly a year. and she missed months of school.


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Identify and underline all the noun phrases in these sentences. One has
been done for you.
a) The trip to the mountains was a great experience.
b) My friends and I left at dawn
C) We travelled in a big and comfortable van.
d)We hoped to arrive at our destination before dark.
e) The van headed towards the highway, and we reached the base of
the mountain.
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A coworker did not clean his work area before going home. This could cause an accident, so you quickly clean up. The next day you see the coworker.
What would you be most and least likely to do?​

Why are fat crayons recommended for use with young children​

One day, Persephone and her nymph companions were out in a meadow picking flowers. Hades burst through a cleft in the earth, grabbed Persephone, and disappeared with her before her nymphs had a chance to interfere with the abduction.

Where does the tone in this passage change?
a.
When Hades burst through a cleft in the earth
c.
When Persephone picks flowers
b.
When Persephone is grabbed by Hades
d.
none of the above

7. Choose the correct way to write the underlined part of sentence 8.
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