The following sentence has been revised in several ways. Which of the revisions does not improve the awkward or illogical construction?

Idiosyncrasies are where a person has peculiar mannerisms and habits.

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Answer 1

Answer:

Where you write pompous, bombastic nonsense is Fustian writing.

Explanation:

This phrase is the only one among the options provided that is confusing, without coherence, cohesion or meaning. With this, we can conclude that it is the revision that does not improve the awkward and illogical construction.

(I've done that problem before, I had gotten it right, I hope this helps)

Answer 2

Answer:

Hello,

This is your current sentence:

Idiosyncrasies are where a person has peculiar mannerisms and habits.

It can be revised like this: Idiosyncrasies is a condition in which a person has peculiar mannerisms or habits.

Explanation:

"Idiosyncrasies ARE where a person..." doesn't really make sense. revising it in the way that I just showed you helps the sentence to be clear to the reader and more grammatically accurate.

Have a great day! :)


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Why does the old man add "if you should live till then"?
-. What does the rioter accuse the old man of doing?

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Answer:

Why does the old man add "if you should live till then"? He adds that, because he knows they won't last long. They will probably die quickly. ... The rioter accuses the old an of being a spy for death.

Explanation:

What are the three components of a logical argument?
a. problems, answers, and conclusions
b. problems, evidence, and answers
c. reasons, answers, and evidence
d. reasons, evidence, and conclusions

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Answer:

answer should be D

Explanation:

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What did mr.wilson do?
A. sleep with jessica
B. sleep with jessica
C. die

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Answer:

a

Explanation:

Read this paragraph from chapter 5 of The Prince. There are, for example, the Spartans and the Romans. The Spartans held Athens and Thebes, establishing there an oligarchy: nevertheless they lost them. The Romans, in order to hold Capua, Carthage, and Numantia, dismantled them, and did not lose them. They wished to hold Greece as the Spartans held it, making it free and permitting its laws, and did not succeed. So to hold it they were compelled to dismantle many cities in the country, for in truth there is no safe way to retain them otherwise than by ruining them. And he who becomes master of a city accustomed to freedom and does not destroy it, may expect to be destroyed by it, for in rebellion it has always the watchword of liberty and its ancient privileges as a rallying point, which neither time nor benefits will ever cause it to forget. And whatever you may do or provide against, they never forget that name or their privileges unless they are disunited or dispersed, but at every chance they immediately rally to them, as Pisa after the hundred years she had been held in bondage by the Florentines. Which statement best summarizes the central idea of the paragraph? The Spartans and the Romans are alike in how they retain possession of newly acquired states. The Spartans and the Romans are alike in their approach to ruling newly acquired states. Observing what happened to the Spartans and the Romans shows that it is best to destroy a newly acquired state that is accustomed to freedom. Observing what happened to the Spartans and the Romans shows that it is best to establish an oligarchy in a newly acquired state that is accustomed to freedom.

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Answer:

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Write the central idea of the poem, “God's Grandeur”.

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Answer:

Mans contact with the natural world and the eternal presence of god are the major themes of this Italian sonnet. the speaker is overwhelmed and excited by the existence of god

what is the correct comma usage in these sentences?

Oil which is lighter than water rises to the surface. Madame de Stael was an attractive gracious lady. Nice is a word with many meanings and some of them are contradictory. The contractor testified that the house was completed and that the work had been done. I told everyone to send their RSVE to you Helen. The closet contained worn clothes old shoes and dirty hats. After a good washing a grooming, our pup looked like a new dog. Mark Twain's early novels I believe stand the test of time. The field was safe enough wasn't it? He replied "I have no idea what you mean". He became aware of the Russian's genius after he read the Chekhov stoory. Dauphin Island located off the coast of Alabama is a favorite spot for fishermen.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Oil which is lighter than water rises to the surface. Madame de Stael was an attractive gracious lady, nice is a word with many meanings and some of them are contradictory. The contractor testified that the house was completed and that the work had been done. I told everyone to send their RSVE to you Helen, the closet contained worn clothes old shoes and dirty hats. After a good washing and grooming, our pup looked like a new dog. Mark Twain's early novels I believe stand the test of time. The field was safe enough wasn't it? He replied "I have no idea what you mean". He became aware of the Russian's genius after he read the Chekhov stoory. Dauphin Island located off the coast of Alabama is a favorite spot for fishermen.

Answer:

Oil, which is lighter than water rises, to the surface.

Madame de Stael was an attractive, gracious lady.

Nice is a word with many meanings, and some of them are contradictory.

The contractor testified that the house was completed and that the work had been done.

I told everyone to send their RSVE to you Helen.

The closet contained worn clothes, old shoes, and dirty hats.

After a good washing a grooming, our pup looked like a new dog.

Mark Twain's early novels, I believe, stand the test of time.

The field was safe enough, wasn't it? He replied, "I have no idea what you mean".

He became aware of the Russian's genius, after he read the Chekhov stoory.

Dauphin Island located off the coast of Alabama, is a favorite spot for fishermen.

Explanation:

Do they give a reason why this god/goddess is a good leader? Yes No

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Answer:

yes?

Explanation:

Who are the great playwrights of Greece

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Answer:

ARISTOPHANES( the most famous writer of Greek comedies)

AESCHYLUS

SOPHOCLES

EURIPIDES

Explanation:i hope this helps

ARISTOPHANES.

AESCHYLUS.

SOPHOCLES.

EURIPIDES.

So i need to learn something in spanish can i have help plz

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Answer:

yep, whatcha need help with?

Answer: Buenos noches (Good evening)

Explanation:

Hope this helps if you need to learn any thing else just ask me I know a lot of spanish

write a sentence using a noun that names an idea you cannot usually see ​

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Answer:

The fragrance of a flower is very wonderful

There is fresh air in the sky today

It is very sad to discuss death

Explanation:

Answer question 1 & 2: How can spell check be an effective tool? How can spell check be ineffective?. (The list shows forty commonly misspelled words. Add some words that you commonly misspell to the list:​ Absence, accidentally, accommodate, believe, conscious, criticize. decision, definitely, describe, desperate, disappoint, embarrass, environment, exaggerate. Excellent, excessive, fascinating, fortunately, guarantee, harass, humorous, successful, truly, vechile, weird). 1) Type additional word. 2) Type additional word. 3)Type additional word. 4) Type additional word, 5) Type additional word. Will Mark Brainliest.​

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Spell check is effective, especially, when you are working on official things, like work documents, school papers, important mails etc. People usually make mistakes while typing which they do not notice. Spell check fixes our mistakes.

Spell check will not detect the improper use of homonyms, such as "their" and "there." Spell check may flag words as errors which are indeed correct. Spell check does not always offer useful spelling suggestions for severely misspelled words.

Oftenly misspelled words:

beginning (as begining)

embarrass (as embarass)

business (as buisness)

separate (as seperate)

government (as goverment)

A speaker says:
You know, you could've finished your project if you hadn't gone to play at your friend's house.

Which of the following is the correct way to transcribe this according to our Clean Verbatim Style Guide?

A) You know, you could have finished your project if you hadn't gone to play at your friend's house.
B) You could have finished your project if you had not gone to play at your friend's house.
C) You could've finished your project if you hadn't gone to play at your friend's house.

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Answer:

C. You could've finished your project 8f you hadn't gone to play at your friend's house

Who is Sir Lancelot asked to rescue? Why?

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Answer:

Urgan the Strong, whose castle is besieged by Sir Melius the Mighty and his two sons.

Explanation:

Are we talking about "The Adventures of Sir Lancelot"?

Answer:

He was told to rescue Queen Guinevere.

Explanation:

In this romantic tale, the valiant knight Lancelot must rescue Queen Guinevere because others have failed to do so. He observes her being abducted and realizes that he must take the initiative.

“The Highway man is a

A. lyric poem

B. narrative poem

C. sonnet

D. ballad

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the answer would be B because it tells a story

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Read the sentences:


My brother ran quickly toward the ticket booth, ________ my sister walked calmly because she was not in a hurry.


Choose the correct transition word to complete the sentence.



A) both

B) for this reason

C) in order to

D) whereas

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D. Whereas
The sentence talks about the difference that the brother and sister did

Answer:

it should be D, whereas

Explanation:

the rest of the options don't fit into this sentence

how does Martin luther king portray the appalling condition of nagro community?(i have a dream)​

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Answer:   King used universal themes to depict the struggles of African Americans before closing with an improvised riff on his dreams of equality.

Explanation:

The “I Have a Dream” speech, delivered by Martin Luther King, Jr. before a crowd of some 250,000 people at the 1963 March on Washington, remains one of the most famous speeches in history. Weaving in references to the country’s Founding Fathers and the Bible. The eloquent speech was immediately recognized as a highlight of the successful protest, and has endured as one of the signature moments of the civil rights movement.  

how to write a persuasive outline​

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Answer:

Write something that will actually grab your teachers attention for whatever you want to write about

Explanation:

1. pick a topic

2. stick with it

3. grab strong arguments

4. craft your outline

Read the following excerpt from The First Men in the Moon then answer the question below.

Exactly as he came against the sun he stopped, pulled out a watch, hesitated. Then with a sort of convulsive gesture he turned and retreated with every manifestation of haste . . .
Based on the excerpt, which of the details about Mr. Cavor is explicit?

He retreats with haste.
He goes back home.
He is concerned with the time.
He is a nervous man.

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Answer:

He retreats with haste,

Answer:

He retreats with haste

Explanation:

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How is death perceived in the poem Full Fathom Five Thy Father Lies? Explain. ​

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Answer:

Death is perceived as a Meaningful transformation.

Explanation:

Full Fathom Five Thy Father Lies’ is a song extracted from the play written by William Shakespeare. The play is titled The Tempest and this extract was culled from scene 2 of the play.

In it, it was revealed that a spirit named Aerial sang a sing to Ferdinand, notifying him about the death of his Father.

However, while describing the death of his father, he claimed that his father has TRANSFORMED into something rich and strange. The description of the transformation says his bones have turned to "coral" and his eyes to "pearls".

If you had to attend in a group discussion what techniques would you use? ANSWER AS FAST AS YOU CAN THIS IS A GRADE. FIRST PERSON TO ANSWER GETS BRAINLEST.

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Answer:

I would say to wait and see what everyone else says and go last

Explanation:

i would do this so i could get an idea of what to say instead of being put on the spot to go first.

Answer:

Model the behavior and attitudes you want group members to employ.

Use encouraging body language and tone of voice, as well as words.

Give positive feedback for joining the discussion.

Be aware of people's reactions and feelings, and try to respond appropriately.

Ask open-ended questions.

Control your own biases.

Explanation:

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Just please write a discussion question about Diary of a Wimpy Kid: Dog Days! Plz Help!!​
30 points if you get it right!

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Answer:

Yes, I listened to other respectively, asked productive follow-up questions, and entered the discussion in a polite manner. For instance, one of the questions I asked was, "how do you feel about the protagonist using his best friend's father to win over his crush?". I enjoyed hearing others discuss the story as well, especially when Laryssa gave her in-depth thoughts on her take on how a vast majority of children are so addicted to electronics that they hardly ever go outside, much like the protagonist. As well as, how his parents are taking action by threatening him with military school, and how other parents should do the same.

Read the following excerpt from an essay by Stephen Leacock. What is the main idea?

A friend of mine who has ten thousand dollars a year told me the other day with a sigh that he found it quite impossible to keep up with the rich. On his income he couldn't do it. A family that I know who have twenty thousand a year have told me the same thing. They can't keep up with the rich. There is no use in trying. A man that I respect very much who has an income of fifty thousand dollars a year from his law practice has told me with the greatest frankness that he finds it absolutely impossible to keep up with the rich. He says it is better to face the brutal fact of being poor. He says he can only give me a plain meal, what he calls a home dinner—it takes three men and two women to serve it—and he begs me to put up with it.

As far as I remember, I have never met Mr. Carnegie. But I know that if I did he would tell me that he found it quite impossible to keep up with Mr. Rockefeller. No doubt Mr. Rockefeller has the same feeling.

On the other hand there are, and there must be, rich people somewhere. I run across traces of them all the time. The janitor in the building where I work has told me that he has a rich cousin in England who is in the South-Western Railway and gets ten pounds a week. He says the railway wouldn't know what to do without him. In the same way the lady who washes at my house has a rich uncle. He lives in Winnipeg and owns his own house, clear, and has two girls at the high school.

A.
Money means nothing to the rich.
B.
Most rich people are very modest.
C.
Most rich people live abroad.
D.
The rich are never satisfied with their wealth.
E.
The writer hasn’t met any really rich people.

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Answer:

D :)

Explanation:

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Answer:

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Why was George upset about his bunk at first? Omam

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He found a can of a medicine that kills different types of bugs and parasites. Candy tells him the man who stayed in his bunk before was very clean and probably has a can as a precaution.

What are two things that should be included in an informative writing piece?

1. Controlling idea and characters
2.Controlling idea and evidence
3. Opinions and quotations
4. Topic sentence and plot

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Answer:

3

Explanation:

I had $57. Then I earned $15 babysitting. I spent all of the money to buy 9 movie tickets.

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Answer:

I had $57 and earned $15 babysitting. Then, I spent all of the money to buy 9 movie tickets.

What is the Author's attitude or tone in "The So-Called American Dream"
A. Sly, secretive, hard to know.
B. Sarcastic.
C. Cheery, upbeat but envious
D. Remorseful.


what whould you say is the other opinion in where is American Idealism?

A. character starts at home
B. government should foreign affairs
C. money is more important then help others
D. America is the richest country in the word



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1. Sarcastic “so called” shows that what the American dream is not what it is said to be

Was there a text given for the second question? What was it based on?

What message does Act I send about the state of Denmark?

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Answer:

Explanation:

King Claudius sends a letter to the King of Norway to tell young Fortinbras to back off from his plans to attack Denmark. (Act 1, scene 2, I believe) Basically "something is rotten in the state of Denmark" - speaker: Marcellus, a guard, who talks to his philosophical comrade, Horatio, saying, “Something is rotten in the state of Denmark …“ (Act-I, Scene-IV). The reason of saying this is just not that Denmark is facing dirt. It means that the situation of Denmark is similar to a fish that rots from head to tail, or in other words, it shows that everything is not good at top of political hierarchy.

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Read this excerpt from The Call of the Wild by Jack London.

Between them they ran him about for the better part of an hour. They threw clubs at him. He dodged. They cursed him, and his fathers and mothers before him, and all his seed to come after him down to the remotest generation, and every hair on his body and drop of blood in his veins; and he answered curse with snarl and kept out of their reach. He did not try to run away, but retreated around and around the camp, advertising plainly that when his desire was met, he would come in and be good.

Francois sat down and scratched his head. Perrault looked at his watch and swore. Time was flying, and they should have been on the trail an hour gone. Francois scratched his head again. He shook it and grinned sheepishly at the courier, who shrugged his shoulders in sign that they were beaten. Then Francois went up to where Sol-leks stood and called to Buck.
What theme is most supported by the ideas in this excerpt?
A. Good leaders are strong and intelligent.
B. Loyalty can be a very powerful force.
C. Only the strong survive in the wilderness.
D. We are all ruled by our natural instincts.

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Answer:

the answer is C

Explanation:

What evidence from the passage best supports the theme that society placed expectations on men and women based on gender?

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Answer:

“I have often wished that you might be threatened by some great danger, so that I might risk my life's blood, and everything, for your sake.”

Explanation:

The theme that society placed expectations on men and women based on gender is "I have often wished that you might be threatened by some great danger, so that I might risk my life's blood, and everything, for your sake."

What do you mean by gender differentiation?

Different programmes for the needs of the labour market and the family are tied to gender differentiation, influencing benefits claims: women make their claims as spouses and carers, while males make their claims as family providers and wage workers.

The gap in benefit levels between men and women is referred to as gender inequality.

Gender identities that show a diversity of expression outside of the binary framework are referred to as exhibiting gender diversity.

Therefore, the theme that society placed expectations on men and women based on gender is "I have often wished that you might be threatened by some great danger, so that I might risk my life's blood, and everything, for your sake."

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