Read the sentence.
She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing
pool for a cool, brisk swim.
Which is the best revision of this sentence?
She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.
She met her friends at the hotel's bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they could head over to the swimming
pool for a cool, brisk swim.
For a cool, brisk, refreshing swim at the hotel's pool, she met her friends in the hotel's lobby on the bottom floor.
The sentence is correct as written.

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Answer 1

Answer:

She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.

Explanation:

The correct option is the first one. This revision is the most concise, free of redundancy. This means that everything necessary is said with no unnecessary words. When we say that someone is in the lobby of a hotel, we already know that they are on the bottom floor. There is no need to include both lobby and bottom floor in the same sentence. The first sentence is the only one that contains only one of these phrases/words.

Another issue with the original sentence is the incorrect use of commas, and another reason the third option is incorrect is awkward word order.

Answer 2

Answer:

The answer is A

Explanation:

She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.


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Read this key passage from “Just Ask Him.”

One gender role has been slow to change, however: the idea that a woman ought not to ask a man out on a date. This deeply ingrained belief, held by young and old, perpetuates the notion that initiating a relationship is the sole domain of the male. It also fosters the idea that a woman should be a passive participant in her own romantic life, and that she is an object to be “chosen.” It ignores the progress society has made in equalizing gender roles.

What is the best statement of the writer’s claim?
Select one:
a. The idea that a woman can’t ask a man on a date is outdated and limiting.
b. Women should be able to ask men on dates as long as the man approves.
c. A woman should be a passive participant in her own romantic life.
d. Traditionally, asking for a date has been the sole domain of the male.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

the author's tone says that they are annoyed by the fact that women aren't supposed to ask men on dates. They claim it "ignores the progress" that we have made in advancing gender equality today

Select the correct answer. What connection can be made between the function of neurons and the chemical adenosine? A. They are both produced in the brainstem. B. They both help in the process of falling asleep. C. They both help a person to stay awake. D. They are both produced at the base of the brain.

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the guy above me is wrong the answer is They both help in the process of sleeping. Please give brainlist

The body's ability to maintain the proper levels of sleep and wakefulness over time, or sleep-wake homeostasis, is facilitated by the sleep drive. Thus, option B is correct.

What is the impact of adenosine to the function neuron?

Adenosine is a modulator that inhibits neuronal activity in a comprehensive and universal manner.

Adenosine that is typically found in the extracellular space of brain tissue causes tonic activation of adenosine receptors, which causes inhibitory effects that appear to be mediated by both adenosine A1 and A2A receptors.

Under typical circumstances, it encourages sleep and reduces alertness. Adenosine levels in the brain increase hourly when you're awake.

Therefore, The need to sleep, also known as the sleep drive or sleep pressure, increases when adenosine levels rise.

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what is the resolution of Frosty the snowman

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Answer:

Universal presents Frosty the Snowman at the expected 1.33:1 aspect ratio at 1080P resolution, in line with earlier Blu-ray releases. The main feature runs an uncut 25:44 minutes on a BD-50! That leads to an impressive AVC encode well into the 30s that perfectly renders the older cel animation and its grain structure.

Answer: Spoiler alert: Frosty dies. He is viciously murdered by an evil magician named Professor Hinkle, who wants Frosty's magical top hat so badly that he traps him and his friend Karen in a greenhouse while she tries to get warm from the cold. A discarded magic top hat brings to life the snowman that a group of children made, until a magician, professor Hinkle, wants it back, and the temperature starts to rise. Frosty will melt or no longer be a jolly soul, if the kids cannot get him away from Hinkle and warm weather, so he hops a train to the North Pole with young Karen.

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What is the rebuttal in A Modest Proposal?​

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Answer:

Explanation:

In "A Modest Proposal," Jonathan Swift puts forth a satirical argument that the problem of poverty and starvation among the people of Ireland could be solved if the Irish sell their infants as a food source for the wealthy. Swift's true argument is that a wide array of means exist to help the poor.

Briefly explain why esperanza feels so connected to the trees.

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Answer:

"To a great extent, Esperanza identifies with them because she sees herself out of place, to a large extent, on Mango Street. In identifying with the trees, Esperanza is seeking to explain her own state of being in the world. They have roots that go well beyond the surface, and like Esperanza are tied to Mango Street".

Explanation:

What is the tone of the poem "Boy at the Window" by Richard Wilbur?​

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Answer:

is a gentle poem that explores the innocent anxieties of childhood.

Explanation:

Explain why no one wants to believe what Moishe tells them.

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Answer:

ohh im sorry to hear that probobly because he or she ignores them

Explanation:

King notes in lines 69–70 that civil rights activists are sometimes asked, “When will you be satisfied?” What does he say will satisfy African Americans?
A. peace and freedom

B. a Constitutional amendment

C. justice and righteousness

D. creative suffering

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C because the way he said “when will you be satisfied?” it’s giving off a hit saying that African American are ungrateful and should be thankful of what they are doing for them. But instead that’s wrong that is a justice and righteousness.

which description best describes stephan cranes to the maiden

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Answer:

b I think dont trust that I'd dubol check

HELP ME PLZ I NEED IT
how does war start

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Answer:

Often wars are caused by one country's wish to take control of another country's wealth. ... Some scientists believe that as the world's population increases and basic resources become scarce, wars will be fought more often over fundamental essentials, such as water and food.

Explanation:

Answer:

Economic Gain. Often wars are caused by one country's wish to take control of another country's wealth.

Explanation:

16 Drag each tile to the correct box. Arrange the events in the sequence in which they happened. A great bath was built in the city of Mohenjo-daro. The Bhagavad Gita was written. The Rig Veda was composed. The Upanishads were composed. ​

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Answer:

whatd do you mean

Explanation:

what are you asking?

Explanation:

What would you most likely find in the glossary of a book?
1. the chapter titles
2. the author's name
3. the definition of a word
4. the title of the book

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Answer:

The definition of a word :)

How does ethos contribute to a persuasive argument?


A. It develops emotional intelligence among readers

B. It builds in effective conclusion following the body


C. It encourages readers to think objectively, without biases


D. It helps establish the writers Credibly had a good character

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Answer:

D. It helps establish the writers Credibility and good character

Explanation:

Traveling is easier with A guy than
without one

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Answer:

what-

Explanation:

describing your experience attended a wedding ceremony​

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Pretty boring nothing extreme I thought something dramatic will happen but nope
Terrible, it might feel happy to the bride and groom but the chapel seats feel like needles stabbing my but. And brides walk like snails. Literal. Frickin. Snails.

PLEASE HELP ASAP!
Which two descriptions indicate that a book is a memoir?
A retired doctor writes a book about his life.
A journalist writes about the life of a famous politician.
A woman writes about her experiences as a teacher.
An author writes a story about a historical king.
A man writes about his life as a prisoner in a foreign country.

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Answer:

1 and 4

Explanation:

Answer:

1 and 3

Explanation:

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What is the question ? What are we suppose to do?

Answer:

I'm sorry but I can't read what you wrote

Explanation:

Help out of all questions I got dis wrong

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Your answer is D.

It would not be A or B because Margot was not talking. It said “I said,” which supports my answer.

Hope this helps and ha e a nice day/night!!!

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The Maze Runner by James Dashner

Directions: Describe exactly what Thomas experiences once he 'awakens' in this new 'place'.

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Answer:

Explanation:

In the early 1800s (1801 to 1805, depending on the source), Thomas Young conducted his experiment. He allowed light to pass through a slit in a barrier, so it expanded out in wavefronts from that slit as a light source (under Huygens' Principle). In turn, that light passed through the pair of slits in another barrier (carefully placed the right distance from the original slit). Each slit, in turn, diffracted the light as if they were also individual sources of light. The light impacted an observation screen. This is shown to the right.

When a single slit was open, it impacted the observation screen with greater intensity at the center. It then faded as you moved away from the center. There are two possible results of this experiment:

Particle interpretation: If light exists as particles, the intensity of both slits will be the sum of the power from the individual slits.

Wave interpretation: If light exists as waves, the light waves will have interference under the principle of superposition, creating bands of light (constructive interference) and dark (destructive interference).

can some one help me plz​

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

90% of people marry there 7th grade love. since u have read this, u will be told good news tonight. if u don't pass this on nine comments your worst week starts now this isn't fake. apparently if u copy and paste this on ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. you will either get kissed or asked out in the next 53 minutes someone will say i love u

The answer is C

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Which statement is an explicit detail from the passage below?
The first thing to do when preparing to hold an ice cream social is to
determine when and where the event will take place. So that you don't have to
make any last-minute changes or rely on the "hope for the best technique for
planning, you should figure out a date and venue about three months before
you hope to hold the event. It's a good idea to have two or three possible
dates (Saturdays or Friday nights are the best options) so that if your venue is
booked on one date, you can ask about other options.
A. Choosing a venue and a date for your ice cream social is the first step.
B. You want to have a lot of people attend your ice cream social.
C. Saturdays or Friday nights are the best dates because most people aren't
working
D. Ice cream socials are fund-raisers and need a lot of advertising,

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Answer:

A

Explanation:This answer has the most detail about this topic

Answer:    B

Explanation:

Choosing a venue and a date for your ice cream social is the first step.

I NEED HELP!!!! I AM TERRIBLE AT ENGLISH AND DON”T KNOW WHICH ONE IT IS.

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Answer:

D.

Explanation:

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The moral of the fable about the wolf and the lamb is that:

we often give our enemies the tools to destroy us.

if you want something done correctly, you need to do it yourself.

the wicked will always find an excuse to do what they want to.

people should prepare today for the needs of tomorrow.

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Answer:

C. the wicked will always find an excuse to do what they want to

Explanation:

I hope this helps.

Ya I think it’s C to

"If that happened to me, what would I do?" is an example of a(n).
question
A. out-of-left-field
B. from-my-brain
C. in-my-hand
D. on-the-page

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

I'm pretty sure the rest ain't even expressions, and the expression "out-of-left-field" means that it was an unexpected question or statement.

Answer:

from-my-brain

Explanation:

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What did Lizzie do when she “put
one foot forward"?

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Answer:

She made a little progress toward her goal.

Explanation:

I got it right.

The action that Lizzie took by "putting her one foot forward" would be:

A). She made a little progress toward her goal.

Proverb

The proverb "to put one foot forward" stands for 'moving one step ahead in order to attain your intended goal or target.'In the given sentence also, Lizzie 'putting a foot forward' communicates that she has moved ahead a footstep to get closer to her achievement.Therefore, this is the most sufficient meaning to the phrase employed in the sentence.

Thus, option A is the correct answer.

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how to answer ' what is there to do '

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Answer:

umm im not sure im confused but if someone ask what is there to do you can say well you can go relax play outside read book? you can tell the person to watch youtub or other streaming services

Explanation:

What does covetous mean?

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It means greed. It is an uncontrolled desire for earthly possessions.

Explanation:

It means having or showing great desire to posses something belonging to someone else

Select the correctly punctuated sentence.

"I had hoped," Bill said, "that I could play Captain Courageous in the play."
"I had hoped, Bill said, that I could play Captain Courageous in the play."

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Answer:

A."I had hoped," Bill said, "that I could play Captain Courageous in the play."

Explanation:

it is this one because the quotations are in the correct place, whereas B's quotations are only at the beginning and end, and i doubt that in the middle of his sentence, he said "Bill said". this is why the answer is A.

"I had hoped," Bill said, "that I could play Captain Courageous in the play." is the correctly punctuated sentence. Thus, option A is correct.

What is a sentence?

The portion of a sentence that contains the phrase and the words is known as the sentence. Frequently, this has both a subject and a predicate. It must be grammatically proper for a sentence. Additionally, all necessary punctuation should be used in a sentence. Either a noun or a pronoun may be present. The sentence aids in conveying the ideas.

This is the case since the citations are placed where they belong, as opposed to B, who only uses references at the beginning and the conclusion of his sentences.

To provide the reader with detailed details, like when a sentence finishes, whether as well as not it is a query, and when a group of words can be a list, punctuation is used in sentences.

Therefore, option A is the correct option.

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i will give anyone 200 points brainliest if you do a project for me, ill explain

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Answer: no one is going to do that and waste there time for a project they wont need for virtual points

Explanation:

lol you are so lazy this is not a place that you can just put off work

The soldier went well above the call of duty.

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Answer:

YUP

Explanation:

IM HAPPY THE SOLDIER DID

Answer:

Good

Explanation:

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