I need your feedback on my poem
depression
every since my friend left
It has been like a rock
on my back holding me down
until I can't move any more
It's like stepping into a dark and terrifying alley with no idea what awaits you.
it's like you in the middle of the ocean, and there is no land in sight
it's like being punched in the middle of the day randomly
not knowing when the next hit will come
but in the end, they all say the same thing
THEY SAY THAT HOPE IS HAPPINESS.
that's hope is An eternal flame
but that never helps
depression is a Shadow
following you everywhere you go
you cant rid of it
only when your turn on the light
it hides waiting for the next time that your lights turn off
depression is like being Trapped on a Desert Island
The heat keeps burning; I need water. One drop of water is the hope
I have been waiting the drop never came
instead, the ocean came
The ocean is a mighty beast
ok yes thanks for asking I am ok

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Answer 1

Answer:

hmm my opinion is i think your poem is perfect but i think you should go over it and is it me or like the sentence dosent make alot iof sense to me its a very beautiful poem but you have to at least make two things rhyme and it would make more sense ever thing else is ok you would be done with your poem

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

Ok, first of all, you need to add a LOT of periods to this poem. Double check every sentence. Overall, it is cool. Cool Beanz.

Explanation:

Capitalize every letter at the beginning of a sentence. The word an needs to be decapitalized. Same thing for Shadow. Your needs to be you. Trapped and deserted island need to be lowercase. That's all for this one. Also, if you need to talk to someone, Im available for sessions.


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Answer:

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Explanation:

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In "The Night Oak Street Burned Down," how does fear contribute to the outcome? What are some examples from history or your own experiences when acting out of fear had negative outcomes? Positive outcomes? How does fear drive action?

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Answer:

Well everyone is scared bc they can't accept the new neighbors from a different world it scares them so much they do see insane things

why does the author write Daniel's name "Dan'l"? What effect does it have on the reader?

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Answer:

Dan'l Webster is the frog that Smiley educates to jump higher, faster, and farther than any other frog. He beats all the competition until the day that the stranger fills him with a quail shot, immobilizing him.

Explanation:

perhaps it’s a shorter way of writing Daniel or it enhances the way you’re actually supposed to pronounce Daniel. (instead of saying it as “dan-yul” it’s “dan-el”)

How does romeo react to the news of his banishment.

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Answer:

Romeo is extremely upset when he finds out that he is banished.

Explanation: Romeo thinks that banishment is just as bad as death because there is no life outside of Verona for Romeo and that life with Juliet would be unbearable.

Why is it appropriate that Simon’s hair is black, symbolically? Why could it be appropriate for it to be blonde?

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Answer; IT WAS HIS NATURAL HAIR

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How does Paul feel about his own abilities as a soccer player?

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Answer:

Talk about bad news! Paul kneels down on the sideline, takes off his goggles, and starts to cry. When his mom comes to pick him up, he lets her know, in no uncertain terms, that she got him kicked off the team by filling out that IEP form. She sends his dad to talk to the coach and try to resolve the situation.

Explanation:

Answer:

Paul should be able to play soccer on the team because he already has the main necessity that he needs to play. First, Paul wears his regular glasses on a daily basis but that won’t stay on if he plays soccer in them. Paul already has a specially made prescription goggles for him to play soccer in so than the school, or himself wouldn’t have to get any. “In addition to my regular glasses, I have special goggles, prescription goggles, for playing sports. They’re made out of some kind of astronaut plastic that could crash-land on Venus and not break

Paul already has experience playing soccer. For example, he has played many years of goalie before so he already has experience of what to do. He isn’t a beginner to soccer so he could then hope right into, and he wouldn’t be behind everyone else. “I was waiting for Gino, and he knew it. He called for the ball and then placed it with care on the penalty line. He stepped back

three paces and looked right at me. I got down into my goalie crouch, a coiled spring ready to release. Gino shouted like a samurai, took two quick steps, and started his powerful kick. I sprang up and to my right, exactly where I had watched him kick every other penalty shot. I heard the sound of his foot walloping the ball, and then I felt it smack against my right wrist. The ball flew away from the goal as fast as it had flown in. It sailed toward the far sideline. I hit the ground and popped up immediately, ready for more.

# be careful#”

Andrés is writing an article for his town’s parks and recreation website about the different types of rowing boats. The following excerpt is from the opening of his article.

Using nautical terms helps others understand and collaborate on board your boat. When facing toward the bow, or the front of the boat, your left side is called portside and the right is called starboard. Many rowboats feature a square stern, or rear of the boat, toward which the rower faces while propelling the boat forward with oars.

How would you explain Andrés’s strategy for organizing his ideas?

A.
Andrés defines unfamiliar terms for the reader using the definition of organizational strategy.
B.
Andrés contrasts the parts of the boat using the comparison and contrast organizational strategy.
C.
Andrés explains the importance of understanding boat terminology using the cause-and-effect organizational strategy.
D.
Andrés classifies his ideas about rowing according to different nautical concepts using the classification organizational strategy.

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Answer:

A ,

Explanation:

he is defining the unfamiliar words just like the answer says

Answer:

A

Explanation:

what can you learn from the boy with the skateboard add the theme of the poem to the chart HELPPPPPPPPP​

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Answer:

hi there  the answer is don't be afraid to sign your name on something you write

Explanation:

Answer:

I think the answer is just be your self

How does the setting shape Odysseus' character in "Odysseus" from "What Happened Before the Iliad"?​.

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Answer: He uses the field to feign insanity

emergency exits seats are always in high demand provide a possible reason for this

Grade 11
Tourism​

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Answer: In case of an emergency they will have an escape route

Explanation:

What attitude toward slavery does "The Interesting Narrative" most strongly convey?

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Answer:

hope this helps

Explanation:

Perhaps more than anything else, this work is centered around the destructiveness of the slave trade. Equiano's own life bears testament to how terribly it harms everyone involved. Africans, including children, were kidnapped from their homes and severed from their families. The bonds of mother and child, husband and wife, and brother and sister were destroy.

If this were a rough draft of an essay, what would be the BEST way to improve it before turning in the final copy?
A) Rearrange the order of the paragraphs.
B) Add more information and examples to support the main idea.
C) Change the point of view from third person to first person.
D) Rewrite the sentences to make the sentence patterns more varied.

If this were a rough draft of an essay, what would be the BEST way to improve it before turning in the final copy? A) Rearrange the order of the paragraphs. B) Add more information and examples to support the main idea. C) Change the point of view from third person to first person. D) Rewrite the sentences to make the sentence patterns more varied.

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Answer:

Your answer would be:
B.) Add more information and examples to support the main idea.


Explanation:

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which type of prewriting involves simply writing whatever comes to mind for a few minutes without worrying about spelling or grammar?
A. research.
B. mapping.
C. freewriting.
D. visulaizing

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c free writing im not 100% sure

5. Which best describes one of the author's main purposes in writing this text? a. To persuade readers to join the efforts to protect honey badgers b. To compare and contrast honey badgers with beagles and lions c. To describe how honey badgers select their partners d. To explain why honey badgers are so tough​

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Answer: D

Explanation:

To explain why honey badgers are so tough​

Which of the following is not an example of a stereotype? a. Asian people are smart. b. Teenagers are melodramatic. c. All women in the Middle East wear a hijab. d. Some politicians are corrupt. HELP!!!! (its for speech class smh)

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

The other options are highly describing stereotype

Help
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Answer:

1. improve

2. demonstrate

3. sufferer

4. sign

5. undergo

6. attend

7. fail

8. mood

9. weight

10. safe

Which text about the state of Oregon most clearly uses a spatial text structure?
A. A website that introduces all the politicians in the state of Oregon.
B. A book about Oregon that has a chapter for each county.
C. A brochure that includes a map of the state with marked places of interest.
D. An article that discusses the history of Oregon since frontier times.
Can you plz help

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D. An article that discusses

Answer: C,  ;) cause you said it

Explanation:

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Question 5 (Matching Worth 5 points)


Read the excerpt from "Voluntourism: An Opportunity Too Good to be True" and answer the question.



[1] Picture this: It’s Spring Break, and you fly off to some country where there’s lush rainforests and beautiful, blue coastlines to explore. There’s also people in need, so you decide to blend your vacation with volunteering. Volunteering as a tourist, or voluntourism, seems like a great way to explore new regions and help people at the same time. However, this "volunteer plus travel" experience can actually harm local communities. While many teens might view traveling and volunteering abroad as a worthwhile adventure, there are more genuine and effective ways to make a difference.



[2] Most would agree that volunteering in general is a worthy use of time. However, what if you found out the children you are "helping" are actually being kept in poor conditions so voluntourists will spend money to come to the local area? Dale Rolfe, a supporter of ethical voluntourism, explains the shocking reality that "Animal sanctuaries and orphanages are often manufactured for the voluntourist…encouraging a cycle of exploiting the very animals and children the volunteers are trying to help."



How does the speaker structure this part of the argument? Match each sentence to its purpose.

Match Term Definition
While many teens might view traveling and volunteering abroad as a worthwhile adventure… A) Establish the claim of the argument
...there are more genuine and effective ways to make a difference. B) Acknowledge the opposition's position
Most would agree that volunteering in general is a worthy use of time. C) Refute the counterclaim's first point
However, what if you found out the children you are D) Acknowledge the counterclaim's first point
Dale Rolfe, a supporter of ethical voluntourism, explains the shocking reality that E) Provide evidence to disprove the counterclaim's first point

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Answer:

The correct match of the given terms with their purpose would be as follows:

1). "One world...voluntourism" - C. Provide expert testimony to refute the counterclaim's point.

2). "If you...voluntourism" - A. State the claim

3). "Serve...mentor" - B. Provide examples that support the claim

4). "Studies show that volunteering and forming lasting relationships with those you help have a positive impact on your physical and emotional health." - E. Present a point to support the claim

5). "In fact...reduced" - D. Provide facts to support a point

The various details and the function they are serving would be correctly matched as provided above.

The main claim of the work is to inform the readers that a true experience can be gained through several other ways apart from voluntourism.

This is followed by the illustrations that back the claim. A Counterclaim is refuted post this and validating evidence to rebut it.

Lastly, the main point is backed by the facts and recalled to give an impression into readers' mind.

What is the final step in the decision-making process
(1 Point)
make a decision
evaluate your choices
plan how to reach your goal
analyze your resources

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Answer:

Avoid delay when decision-making. Simple decisions, like choosing what to have for breakfast, are easy to make. ...

Leave ego & emotions at the door. .

Get an expert opinion. .

Get the right data.

Understand the risks.

Importance.

Benefits.

Nast also played a huge role in associating Democrats with the donkey. The donkey symbol actually dates back to before Nast's time. During the election of 1828, Andrew Jackson's critics tried to mock him by comparing him to a foolish donkey.


Which phrase from the passage helps you understand the meaning of the word associating?


A. dates back to before
B. by comparing him to
C. played a huge role
D. tried to mock him

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B , by comparing him to a foolish donkey

dont forget to take your umbrella. it .... supply the correct verb of rain​

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Answer:

don't forget to take your umbrella it's raining

Explanation:

it is raining

I need help with this exercise! ​

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Answer:

1)

Janice is heading off to London tommorow

2)

Would you like to take part in the school play next year?

3) Molly was able to write poems from a young age…

Explanation:

I’ll leave the rest to you

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9) A student is planning to write a research report about the benefits of young children playing sports. Which question would BEST focus the research so that the student would find information to use in the report? A) Which sport is the most popular among children? B) At what age should children start playing sports? C) What steps must a person take to play professional sports? D) What are some positive effects of playing sports at a young age?

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Answer: I believe the answer's D.

Answer:

The answer is D :]

Hope I was able to help !! <3

Disappointed in the present and uncertain about the future, _______________ sought to piece together the fragments of everything they had previously known in the hope of rediscovering or reestablishing meaning.

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Realists believed that the information we have in the present is just an approximation of the fact, and it can be detailed in the future when the new information is discovered.

What is Realism?

Realism describes the physical things instead of dramatizing or romanticizing the things. Realism believes in facts and science instead of accepting mythological thoughts.

Realists, were practical and were free from any kind of subjective beliefs or ideas, according to them the knowledge has a scope of further discoveries and can be modified with the new knowledge.

Therefore,  option 'D', 'realists', is correct.

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Answer:

The answer is modernist

Explanation:

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Which philosopher believed the path to new knowledge is by way of inductive reasoning?.

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East’s about the day I have been scammed

What is the difference between a poem and a story? (2 points)

a
A poem has acts while a story has scenes.

b
A poem has paragraphs while a story has stanzas.

c
A poem has scenes while a story has acts.

d
A poem has stanzas while a story has paragraphs.

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Answer:

D) a poem has stanzas while a story has paragraphs

Explanation:

Neither a story or a poem has acts - only plays have acts. So each answer including "[blank] has acts..." can be ignored.

And as a writer of both stories and poetry myself, I can confirm that the blocks of text between line breaks in poems are called "stanzas", while that in stories are called "paragraphs".

I hope this helps

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Why was Thailand important back in it's day?

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Answer:

Thailand is the 20th largest export destination for the United States. Two-way trade of goods in 2018 was $44.5 billion, with $31.9 billion in Thai exports to the U.S. and $12.6 billion in U.S. exports to Thailand. ... Thailand is one of the world's most visited countries and tourism is vital to the Thai economy.

If you could hang out with one famous person, gamer, social media influencer, or someone who has made history for ONE ENTIRE DAY, who would it be and why? Please explain in 5-7 what you would want do do? What would you say to this person? Where would you all go? Really take the time to think about it and write complete sentences.

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Answer:If I could hang out with an famous person for an day it would be Rosa Parks. I would ask her how it actually happened. How she refused to sit down? What did the man say or do to her after she refused? I would also ask what was the boycott like? Was it fun? Was it dangerous? Did it make you feel empowered? I would go to the "Rosa Parks Museum" so she can show me where she sat and demonstrate what happened.

Explanation:

Read the sentence. When I attended the aquarium’s camp, I had a pleasant time studying nocturnal sea animals like the squirrelfish. Which word should be replaced with a more precise word? marine pleasant nocturnal squirrelfish.

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Answer:

B.) Pleasant

Explanation:

The word "pleasant" is vague and could mean a lot of things. This word could be replaced with something more descriptive or precise.

The word that should be replaced with a more precise word will be B. pleasant.

What is definition?

It should be noted that a definition simply means the meaning of a word that can be used based on how it's used.

In this case, the word that should be replaced with a more precise word will be pleasant.

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1) I have hardly ................. eaten Chinese food .

a) never
b) since
c) for
d) ever

2) The global distribution of wealth reflects high levels of....................; there are rich and extremely impoverished countries.

a) majority
b) minority
c) dishonest
d) inequality

3) I ......... resign if I don't get a pay rise .
a) am going
b) will
c) am going to
d) resigns​

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Answer:

1. ever

2. inequality

Explanation:

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