Before I initiated sentence combining practice my students mainly saw the revision process as one of editing. They seemed to operate under a least effort strategy, meaning, they changed what was easiest to change. So they conducted "housekeeping" by fixing spelling, capitalization, formatting, and perhaps punctuation rather than engaging in what revising should have been, namely molding the sound of text to make a message clearer or providing an audience with what they need to know. But after sentence combining practice the number of revisions climbed. My students were changing words, adding phrases and clauses, and re-working entire sentences

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Generally speaking, we can state that the text presents how to make students review texts frequently, can improve the ability of these students to proofread and edit a text, making the text more coherent and fluid, with the modification of the entire structure and text composition. The text above reinforces that this is a result of repeated revisions, which shows that the more revisions students do, the more efficient their ability to edit a text efficiently.

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Read the excerpt below and answer the question. So some of the cheefe of the company, perceiveing the mariners to faare the suffislencle of the shipe, as appeared by their mutterings, they entred into serious consulltation with the mr and other officers of the ship, to consider in time of the danger, and rather to returne then to cast them selves into a desperate and inevitable perill. If the word mutterings were replaced with the word conversations, how would the meaning of the excerpt change? It would change the tone of the excerpt. It would change how the sailors voiced their concerns. It would change the effect of the actions that followed. It would change the way the captain dealt with the sailors.​

Who else is happy that today is the last day of their school year?​

PLEASE HELP!!!Select the correct text in the passage.

In his "Four Freedoms" Speech to Congress, President Franklin Roosevelt calls for the end of human oppression and the beginning of universal liberty. Which sentence from the passage best support this analysis?

from Roosevelt's "Four Freedoms" Speech


The first is freedom of speech and expression—everywhere in the world.

The second is freedom of every person to worship God in his own way—everywhere in the world.

The third is freedom from want—which, translated into world terms, means economic understandings which will secure to every nation a healthy peacetime life for its inhabitants—everywhere in the world.

The fourth is freedom from fear—which, translated into world terms, means a world-wide reduction of armaments to such a point and in such a thorough fashion that no nation will be in a position to commit an act of physical aggression against any neighbor—anywhere in the world.

That is no vision of a distant millennium. It is a definite basis for a kind of world attainable in our own time and generation. That kind of world is the very antithesis of the so-called new order of tyranny which the dictators seek to create with the crash of a bomb.

To that new order we oppose the greater conception—the moral order. A good society is able to face schemes of world domination and foreign revolutions alike without fear.

Since the beginning of our American history, we have been engaged in change—in a perpetual peaceful revolution—a revolution which goes on steadily, quietly adjusting itself to changing conditions—without the concentration camp or the quick-lime in the ditch. The world order which we seek is the cooperation of free countries, working together in a friendly, civilized society.

This nation has placed its destiny in the hands and heads and hearts of its millions of free men and women; and its faith in freedom under the guidance of God. Freedom means the supremacy of human rights everywhere. Our support goes to those who struggle to gain those rights or keep them. Our strength is our unity of purpose.

To that high concept there can be no end save victory.

Which sentence best supports this analysis?

A. It is a definite basis for a kind of world attainable in our own time and generation

B. A good society is able to face schemes of world domination and foreign revolutions alike without fear

C. The world order which we seek is the corporation of free countries, working together in a friendly, civilized way.

D. The nation has placed it's destiny in the hands and heads and hearts of it's millions of free men and woman: and it's faith in freedom under the guidance of God.

E. To that high concept there can be no end to slavery.

Read the lines from "Because I Could Not Stop for Death."

And I had put away
My labor and my leisure too,
For His Civility –

What is the purpose of the words “labor” and “leisure”?
They are aspects of life that frustrate the speaker.
They are elements of life that the speaker wants to show Death.
They are aspects of life that the speaker is leaving.
They are elements of life that the speaker will not miss.

Which of the following lines is an example of personification?

A.The old black witch-woman worked on them all summer, every summer, down on her creaky knees, weeding and cultivating and arranging, while the house crumbled and John Burke rocked.
B.He stood still as an oak tree.
C.The great oak seemed to laugh with him.
D.He felt like a great oak.

We arrived in Thailand 2 days ago.-> We've....

16. Choose the correct order of adjectives to fill in the blank. I bought a pair 1
of
boots. *
O a new, nice, red rain
O b. nice new red rain
O c. red nice new rain​

There have been many cases of fire incident in your local government area.Write a letter nto the chairman of local government discussing the causes and the measures that can be taken to prevent the occurence of fire incidents.

Finding a new animal species is always exciting for scientists. However, it is even more exciting when a new
species finds the scientists. That is what happened to a team of researchers camping in the Foja Mountains of
Indonesia in late 2008. While eating lunch, one scientist looked down. He saw a little frog jump onto a nearby rice
sack, and he caught it with his hands. The creature turned out to be a new species of long-nosed frog. The
scientists named the species Pinocchio.
Do It!
The scientists were
А
fortunate
B unafraid
C peaceful
D
welcomed

The old building was a metaphors

Narrate, a journey you have ever made​

What rhetorical technique does the author use?
A. Ethos
B. Pathos
C. Credibility
D. Logos

What purpose do these lines from Juliet’s soliloquy serve?

to reveal Juliet’s feelings about Romeo
to show what Juliet does when she meets Romeo
to emphasize that Juliet does not really care for Romeo
to show what Juliet says to Romeo

Which sentence from the advertisement insults people who don't have a Superforce 80?
A There is a limited supply.
B Everyone is asking for a Superforce 80.
C Are you in for a treat?
D Don't be left behind in the 20th century.

when summarizing the ___ of a plot, one should notice the key ideas about how the conflict builds

Draw parallels between David McCullough Jr's address to the students of Wellesley HIgh School and the message of Miley Cyrus' song "The Climb" AND Five for Fighting's "100 Years" . Use text evidence from all three works in your answer using DIRECT CITATIONS.

write a descrition of what is happening in the scene​

Persuading a peace activist to support a war involves is an example of the most challenging goal of persuasive speaking because it requires:

a.
changing values
b.
motivating to action
c.
weakening likes
d.
strengthening beliefs

6.
Which of the following indefinite pronouns is always plural?


A. many


B. neither


C. every


D. each

Question 5
Thousands of people walk every day. P for phrase, IC for independent clause, and DC for dependent clause

How is the weather at Rara lake?
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Our twenty-fifth wedding anniversary is at the end of the next year. -> By the end of the next year....

Everywhere was a shadow of death. The farmers spoke of much illness among their families. In the town the doctors had become more and more puzzled by new kinds of sickness appearing among their patients. There had been several sudden and unexplained deaths, not only among adults but even among children, who would be stricken suddenly while at play and die within a few hours.

—Silent Spring,
Rachel Carson

Which is the best comparison of the tone in these passages?

Both passages have a dark, frightening tone.
Both passages have a somber tone, but the second is more somber.
While the first passage has a dark, horrifying tone, the tone of the second is much lighter.
While the first passage has a negative tone, the second has an even more negative tone.

Combine the pairs of sentences by using suitable conjunction.

( as, but, even though, or, when, since)

1. The chocolate icing is creamy. The vanilla icing is too stiff.
2. Tomorrow may be sunny. Tomorrow may be partly cloudy.
3. They are uncomfortable. Safety goggles should be worn at all times.
4. He made his way steadily down. A grin began to spread over his face.
5. Bill and Phil became partners. They started their own shoe business.

How does author use of language shape reader perception of the narrator

Choose the synonym that best clarifies the meaning of the underlined word in this sentence:

The kids wanted to keep the lost dog safe, so they quickly gathered supplies to build a makeshift doghouse.

expedient
provisional
slapdash
temporary

Which detail best shapes the idea that the Japanese art of boat building may be lost to future generations?

excerpt from School of Hard Knots
by Alex Hanson

The typical apprenticeship with a Japanese traditional boatbuilder lasts six years, during which an apprentice can expect to spend a lot of time sweeping the shop floor and sharpening tools while watching the master ply his trade. Work is conducted in silence, questions are answered elliptically, if at all, and, by the end, the master will have withheld key pieces of knowledge that the apprentice is expected to acquire through guile or outright theft.
Even in Japan, where traditional crafts are revered, this system is too grueling, too much at odds with modern life, to survive. It is no wonder, then, that as a generation of Japanese boatwrights has retired, their knowledge has retired with them. Vermont boatbuilder Douglas Brooks is trying to ensure that the centuries-old designs for fishing boats and water taxis don't follow these craftsmen to the grave.
For more than two decades, Brooks has researched traditional boatmaking in Japan, and has done short, nontraditional apprenticeships to record boat designs. Ordinarily, no Westerner would have a hope of learning in a few weeks what usually takes years of patient observation to acquire.
This article was first published in May/June 2013 issue of Humanities, which is published by the National Endowment for the Humanities.

Describe the beauty of London city ?

Which is the most grammatically correct way of rewriting sentence 2 (reprinted here)?
In fact, they had neither the freedom to decide where to watch the movie nor to choose when to see it.


In fact, they either had the freedom to decide where to watch the movie nor to choose when to see it.

In fact, they had not the freedom to decide where to watch the movie nor to choose when to see it.

In fact, they had neither the freedom to decide where to watch the movie or to choose when to see it.

In fact, they had the freedom neither to decide where to watch the movie nor to choose when to see it.